It's hard sometimes
In today's Daily Haiku, I wanted to experiment with breaking sentences and breathing between the sentences.
The Daily Haiku for Jan 16. It's hard sometimes.
It's hard sometimes, to
get out of bed, of comfort,
of sleep oblivion
In today's Daily Haiku, I wanted to experiment with breaking sentences and breathing between the sentences. The first sentence is supposed to stop for a second as if wanting to find the right word, or take a breath before continuing. I think it conveys tiredness.
Even when it is a very shy exploration, I like the results, so I will be experimenting more with structure, breathing, and phrasing in the future.
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