The Daily Haiku for Jan 16. It's hard sometimes.
It's hard sometimes, to
get out of bed, of comfort,
of sleep oblivion
In today's Daily Haiku, I wanted to experiment with breaking sentences and breathing between the sentences. The first sentence is supposed to stop for a second as if wanting to find the right word, or take a breath before continuing. I think it conveys tiredness.
Even when it is a very shy exploration, I like the results, so I will be experimenting more with structure, breathing, and phrasing in the future.