Senseless, Meaningless
Today's Daily Haiku is an exploration of how the flow and rhythm of emotions can vary in something as minimalist as a haiku poem.
The Daily Haiku for Jan 17. Senseless, meaningless.
Senseless, meaningless,
ire, sorrow, angst, daze, and you...!
you don't understand.
I decided to explore variations in flow and rhythm, specially of emotions. The short sentences (5 syllabes) convey a sense of confusion or sadness, while the long one (7 syllabes) express a heavier emotion, perhaps more angry or asking, while the other two are just affirmative.
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